Te Whare Tapa Wha
Te Whare Tapa Wha is a concept we talk about a lot.
They are the 4 pillars of healthy living - Your physical (taha tinana), your mental (taha hinengaro), your spiritual (taha wairua), and your family/social (taha whanau) wellbeing.
Today we will be focusing on our Taha Hinengaro - Our mental wellbeing.
Today you will be focusing on EXPLANATORY WRITING
Explanatory Writing |
“Hi, my name is Emilio. This lockdown has been really tough. I find myself feeling lazy, and sad a lot of the time. What are some ways I can cheer myself up during lockdown?” Your task for this piece of writing is to write at least 2 PEEL paragraphs giving Emilio advice on how to look after their mental health during lockdown. You will need to give at least 2 different pieces of advice, and explain to Emilio how they could go about doing that. Remember for explanatory writing:
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PLANNING
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Paragraph One | Paragraph Two | ||
POINT (One sentence - what should they do?) | You could maybe write a story on paper or laptop about a fake fantasy. | POINT (One sentence - what should they do?) | You could play games or even go outside to meditate or exercise or go for a walk. |
EXPLANATION: (Two sentences - what do you mean by that?) | Fantasy stories always cheer people besides all the fantasy haters. Fantasy brings life to Earth with all its mystical creatures. For example Lord of the rings. | EXPLANATION: (Two sentences - what do you mean by that?) | Sometimes games can take the stress away or it could make you frustrated. But on the other hand walks and exercise’s take the stress but like the game it adds stress but it still makes you feel happy with your body. |
EXAMPLE: (One or two sentences - What does this look like?) | Fantasy writing is a world known thing for it also makes kids happy and sometimes adults as well. This fantasy genre is one of the best genres. | EXAMPLE: (One or two sentences - What does this look like?) | Games and exercises are very well known. Exercises are the best for your body and games just give you anger but also want to make you explore more of the ame. |
LINK: (One sentence - Why will this make them feel better?) | Fantasy writing is the thing that turns from books to movies and that is the magic of fantasy stories | LINK: (One sentence - Why will this make them feel better?) | Overall, games and exercises are good to do. Just make sure to take some sunlight instead of sitting there playing games. Another thing is to read books. |
Begin your paragraph writing here:
You could maybe write a story on paper or laptop about a fake fantasy. |
Fantasy stories always cheer people besides all the fantasy haters. Fantasy brings life to Earth with all its mystical creatures. For example Lord of the rings. |
Fantasy writing is a world known thing for it also makes kids happy and sometimes adults as well. This fantasy genre is one of the best genres. |
Fantasy writing is the thing that turns from books to movies and that is the magic of fantasy stories |
You could play games or even go outside to meditate or exercise or go for a walk. |
Sometimes games can take the stress away or it could make you frustrated. But on the other hand walks and exercise’s take the stress but like the game it adds stress but it still makes you feel happy with your body. |
Games and exercises are very well known. Exercises are the best for your body and games just give you anger but also want to make you explore more of the ame. |
Overall, games and exercises are good to do. Just make sure to take some sunlight instead of sitting there playing games. Another thing is to read books. |
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