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Thursday, 9 September 2021

Writing task: Will David Fusitu’a and the Tongan rugby league team win?

 Will David Fusitu’a and the Tongan rugby league team win?

Narrative Writing 


WALT: write a narrative that is descriptive (paints a picture in the reader's mind)


Today we are creating a piece of narrative writing about David Fusitu’a playing for Tonga in a rugby league game! They could be playing against any other team of your choice. 


You will need to write a minimum of 4 paragraphs. 


Fill in the below table to help you plan.


Planning:

Your Thoughts and Answers:

Who is the Tongan team playing?

Brisbane broncos 

Where is your narrative set?

They will play in mount smart stadium 

Who are the main characters?

David Fusitu’a 

What are the main ideas for your narrative?

They will play in mount smart stadium 

Will they win or lose the game?

Win  

Introduction:


Problem:


Solution:




Start writing here:

Well would you look at this it’s the match of the century. The Brisbane's vs The Mate Ma’a Tonga team in Mount Smart Stadium. It looks like David Fusitu'a and his team has emerged from one side and the Brisbane team emerges from the other. They head towards the field and get ready to face each other. 


The ball is then taken to the field. 3.2.1 the match has begun. David goes in strongly, taking the ball while Payne tries to tackle but he misses. David goes for the goal and SCORE! David Fusitu’a got the score. Now they have to do a conversion. They got Daniel Tupou to kick the ball through the goal.


He then kicked the ball into the goal and the crowd went wild screaming goal! They then passed the ball to Xaiver Coates and he kicked the ball but David caught the ball and passed it to Andrew. Andrew pushes through the Broncos and passes to Joe and Joe runs as fast as he can but Tevita Pangai tackles Joe. Joe places down the ball and passes it to Tevita Tatola.


A few hours go by and they are at a tie 4 to 4 and this was the final countdown. David had control of the ball once again and he ran through the Broncos team. He was just about to be tackled and then bang he he got a try. At that moment the Tongan team won with one score up. 






The End  



 




1 comment:

  1. Malo e lelei Leonidas, I really like the hook you wrote for your narrative. Well done

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