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Tuesday, 21 April 2020

What creature is in Miss West’s hands?

What creature
is in Miss
West’s hands?


WALT use a wide range of describing words in our writing


TASK DESCRIPTION:

Miss West discovered a creature 
in the garden which had never 
been found before. 


What was the creature that she 
found? What happened when she 
opened her hands to show you?

Write to describe the creature that was in Miss West’s hands.




DRAW A PICTURE OF THE IMAGINARY 
CREATURE FOUND IN MISS WEST’S HANDS:







PLAN:

What do you see?

What do you hear?

What do you smell?

What do you feel?




START WRITING HERE: 


Miss West opened her hand and a pet mouse with talking abilities appeared.
Miss West felt little footprints walking around in circles then the mouse said ‘’hello’’
to Miss West he smelled like roses.
He was  also had Telekinesis and he was actually the ghost of Christmas past 



1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Leonidas,
    Great work - I love the stye of writing you have used to describe the mouse! This description is very poetic, almost like a haiku but with more syllables.

    Awesome to see you blogging during remote learning!

    Ngā mihi,
    Mr Vogt

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