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Friday 29 October 2021

Writing task

 Can you save the community?


Today we are creating a piece of narrative writing about a comic book hero! 


You are to use the picture on the right as your story starter or even your story finisher. Not sure what this means? Well, the picture could depict what is happening in the beginning of your story. You would describe the events from the picture then tell your audience what happens next. Or if you’re using the picture as your story ending, what are the events that led to this action packed scene?


Use the table below to answer the main questions for your narrative before you begin writing!



Bronze - Two Paragraph

Silver Three Paragraphs

Gold - Four or more Paragraphs

Medal Achieved:


Gold, Silver, Bronze awards icons by Aidan Dore on Dribbble


Planning:

Your Thoughts and Answers:

Are you using the picture as the beginning or ending of your story?

Beginning 

Hero:

Spidey (Spider-man), Doctor Strange and Thor 

Villain:

Dark Absorber and Doctor Doom 

Other Characters (if any):

Mary Jane

Problem:

Doctor Doom has set out on a journey back to Earth to Destroy it. Little did Doctor Doom know he was heading straight to his Demise, maybe that is? Maybe he will turn good. 

Solution:

Their last solution is to find a weakness for the Dark Absorber and destroy him or it hopefully for good. 

If beginning, what could happen next?


In the end, what happened before this scene?


Begin your writing here:

Mary Jane was falling from the sky after she fell off the tower then spider man dived off the Stark Industries tower to catch Mary Jane. As Strange and Thor fought off The Dark Absorber.  Now you might be asking how are we here? Well let’s start from the beginning. It had been a while since the last time Thor and Doctor Strange had seen the Dark Absorber and seen light. They had been stuck in that one lab for 1 year. It was 2022 October the 13th. They had been focusing on their project for 1 year. On that day their lives would be met by an old friend who escaped from the clutches of you know who. He had been living with Mary Jane for the last past year. They had been living in a secret area away from The Dark Absorber. One day Spidey went to visit the lab yet he didn’t know it was occupied. He went inside to look for supplies to take back to the shelter. He then used his spidey sense and heard mysterious noises coming from the inside. At that moment he realized whose voices those were. They were the voices of a mighty god and a supreme sorcerer. “Doctor Strange, Thor, where are you!?” asked spidey. We're over here Says Doctor strange. Spider man walked towards the sound and saw Strange and Thor building a machine. “It is powered by my lightning and it is ready”. Doctor Strange then says Yes, now we must send it to Stark Industries tower. Alright said Spiderman let's do this. But then there was a big sound, a big THUMP coming from outside the door. “He’s here” says Thor. They ready their arms but to their surprise a beaten up Doctor Doom appears at their door. In a shattered voice he says “Help Me Please” he then trips over knocking himself out. Doctor Strange takes him to a bench and puts him down. “He’s pulse is low and he is nearing death but I can help him” a few hours later. Doctor doom is up to fool health. Spiderman then gets a call from the Stark Industries tower. “Hello” said Spiderman and on the other side was a crying Mary Jane. “Help me Pete please” the phone is then cut. “STRANGE WE NEED TO GO NOW!” says Spider man in a furious voice. “Why?” said Doctor Strange. He has  Mary Jane in a crying voice. “Fine we shall go now” says Thor. “What About me says Doctor Doom. you shall not fight us you shall help us fight him says Spiderman. They proceed to go to the Tower with the machine. “This ends now Dark absorber” says Doctor strange. “No your time has ended” Says Doctor Doom stabbing Doctor strange. “What” says Thor and  Spiderman. I have accomplished my mission. “Good Doctor Doom now to show your loyalty. Throw her off the Tower'' says DA. Strange says no because he sent in a clone because they planned his fake death blah blah blah big battle and then there’s the part where Mary Jane is thrown off by DA. Now we are back here with Pete catching Mary Jane. he swings up and punches DA. DA gets blasted to space and lives but he goes to another universe WITH A BIG FAT BLACK HOLE. and he is never heard from again or so they thought. MWAHAHAHAHA. THE END 

DA stands for Dark Absorber.


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